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Friday, June 17, 2016

Poetry Friday by the lake at dusk




ripples
nudge the shoreline
chuckling

©Mary Lee Hahn, 2016






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15 comments:

  1. What a beautiful scene this is, and your poem is perfect. I love to think of those ripples nudging and chuckling. Thank you.

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  2. My vacations spots always include water of some kind and mostly lakes. I love the idea of ripples as chuckles. What a beautiful moment at dusk.

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  3. What a perfect image of peace. I agree with Irene and Mandy, the clucking ripples are adorable.

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  4. Anonymous10:37 AM

    That is so lovely and calming.

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  5. The simplicity and imagery are fantastic!

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  6. Wonderful, Mary Lee. I love the picture too, and others you've recently posted.

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  7. Anonymous9:18 PM

    Simply lovely.

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  8. *sigh*...love this tiny soothing poem, Mary Lee. =)

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  9. Anonymous8:30 AM

    So few words, so much love.

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  10. Love the unexpected word, "chuckling." That is such a fun way to describe the waves. I'm chuckling, too.

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  11. Anonymous11:17 AM

    Serenity: chuckling ripples nudging the shore at sunset.

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  12. Mary Lee, this is so lovely. Thank you!

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  13. Mary Lee, this is so lovely. Thank you!

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