tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post108686530650351264..comments2024-03-19T05:26:04.770-04:00Comments on A Year of Reading: Poetry Friday: Leaf HurricaneMary Leehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09078793537148794310noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post-10518161926843527422013-11-03T15:31:20.922-05:002013-11-03T15:31:20.922-05:00Love it! I remember dancing with the leaves as a g...Love it! I remember dancing with the leaves as a girl! Nice repeated refrain slightly changed up!BJ Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05810656260650783785noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post-31719493737936205752013-11-03T06:59:15.801-05:002013-11-03T06:59:15.801-05:00Hi, Mary Lee--
I'll be sharing this poem with...Hi, Mary Lee--<br /><br />I'll be sharing this poem with my Sophia, who goes out every day at our break time and becomes a tornado, whether there's wind or leaves or not!Heidi Mordhorsthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09902158336083356337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post-11640267269891351432013-11-03T01:48:59.734-05:002013-11-03T01:48:59.734-05:00Mary Lee, I'm posting Mortimer's Minute fo...Mary Lee, I'm posting Mortimer's Minute for Poetry Friday this coming week, and I'm looking for someone to tag - Would you like to participate? Email me directly or leave a comment at my blog to let me know. Thanks! For an example, here's Bridget's post when she tagged me:<br />http://www.weewordsforweeones.blogspot.com/2013/10/mortimer-minute-for-poetry-friday.htmlAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post-83630088584735805212013-11-02T22:54:16.804-04:002013-11-02T22:54:16.804-04:00The repetition sings beautifully as the new lines ...The repetition sings beautifully as the new lines twirl about the page. Wonderful rhythm.<br /><br />CathyCathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08233792477358685156noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post-67655924151820018642013-11-02T12:11:07.136-04:002013-11-02T12:11:07.136-04:00What a beautiful image you've captured!What a beautiful image you've captured!Renee LaTulippehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13520719663052253627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post-83123605277737451502013-11-02T10:34:30.656-04:002013-11-02T10:34:30.656-04:00I love he way you captured the spirit of the child...I love he way you captured the spirit of the children AND the leaves...Tara @ A Teaching Lifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07195982194362559883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post-19545612043003230832013-11-02T09:02:35.130-04:002013-11-02T09:02:35.130-04:00This has been a week of whirling and swirling leav...This has been a week of whirling and swirling leaves in Colorado too. On Wednesday, I watched the sixth grade girls play, just like this. I'm going to print this out and show it to them on Monday. I love those last two lines!Carolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13294455230627182656noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post-65567840936902448422013-11-01T22:24:02.657-04:002013-11-01T22:24:02.657-04:00Wonderful! I like the placement of your stanzas on...Wonderful! I like the placement of your stanzas on the page / screen too. it adds to the feeling of movement. <br /><br /><a href="http://vnesdolypoems.wordpress.com" rel="nofollow">Violet N.</a>Violet N.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16586574800230604652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post-35772074973128575212013-11-01T18:15:47.314-04:002013-11-01T18:15:47.314-04:00So happy you and the children danced with the leav...So happy you and the children danced with the leaves, Mary Lee. What a joy-filled poem. We had that wind-driven kind of day too yesterday. Thank you!Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post-21998788514611513402013-11-01T17:05:24.664-04:002013-11-01T17:05:24.664-04:00I want to spin in the swirling leaves! Fabulous im...I want to spin in the swirling leaves! Fabulous images of childhood joy. Thank you, Mary Lee. =)Bridget Mageehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18185985167366724404noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post-69079983866941431102013-11-01T17:05:18.237-04:002013-11-01T17:05:18.237-04:00So fun!So fun!Ruthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12463332371535167975noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post-65927754606191071332013-11-01T16:45:05.811-04:002013-11-01T16:45:05.811-04:00I love that the dance is "magic to me." ...I love that the dance is "magic to me." A refreshing lack of inhibition!Kerihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07754424789728293252noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post-53670897346000773372013-11-01T16:40:15.444-04:002013-11-01T16:40:15.444-04:00I love the image of children dancing with the leav...I love the image of children dancing with the leaves. Margaret Simonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04434866104385187658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post-90639594512744698782013-11-01T15:20:50.747-04:002013-11-01T15:20:50.747-04:00I love the way you led up to those lovely last lin...I love the way you led up to those lovely last lines. Jeannine Atkinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12886966069866356470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post-33022495362932907922013-11-01T15:07:24.005-04:002013-11-01T15:07:24.005-04:00The wind is blowing here--and the leaves and rain!...The wind is blowing here--and the leaves and rain! I love this time of year, and hope to dance in the leaves this weekend. I will think of your poetry, as I marvel at the leaves. I love where the inspiration came for this poem--children enjoying the outdoors and the beauty of nature. <br /><br />Happy November to you, Mary Lee!Lisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03608709109853440492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post-13562754093939194122013-11-01T15:05:32.730-04:002013-11-01T15:05:32.730-04:00This comment has been removed by the author.Lisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03608709109853440492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post-56610945550913503762013-11-01T12:49:49.972-04:002013-11-01T12:49:49.972-04:00Love your leaf hurricane, and especially these lin...Love your leaf hurricane, and especially these lines:<br /><br />I dance with the wind<br />I dance with the leaves<br /><br />I can see those kids on your playground!Buffy Silvermanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07223895917772531703noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post-17021170352423371682013-11-01T10:13:43.397-04:002013-11-01T10:13:43.397-04:00Go kids! I love it when leaves dance on the breeze...Go kids! I love it when leaves dance on the breeze!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post-31885833856155053012013-11-01T09:12:53.214-04:002013-11-01T09:12:53.214-04:00What a swirl of fun. Love the image of kids dancin...What a swirl of fun. Love the image of kids dancing with the leaves.jamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07859083373087448194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post-42847794462322751302013-11-01T07:26:31.432-04:002013-11-01T07:26:31.432-04:00My spirit flies free - yes! Isn't that enough ...My spirit flies free - yes! Isn't that enough reason to dance, with or without leaves?! Thank you for sharing, Mary Lee!Irene Lathamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04905936104127707762noreply@blogger.com