tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post58148656436647947..comments2024-03-19T05:26:04.770-04:00Comments on A Year of Reading: STREAMSIDE -- a river poem, a spring poemMary Leehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09078793537148794310noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post-41944992764456458972012-04-04T05:58:35.188-04:002012-04-04T05:58:35.188-04:00Mary Lee,
Like you, I've been thankful for my ...Mary Lee,<br />Like you, I've been thankful for my notebook. I put it aside for technology a few years ago. I just was a little between collecting ideas on a device and on paper. While writing Slice of Life posts I realized that the best pieces were those that had some fragment from my notebook. I had played more with the writing in my notebook. I was able to cross out, write numerous possibilities, and discover lines that work. So...I'm back to my notebook. Lesson learned. Now if I could just figure out how to organize it!?<br /><br />I enjoyed your poem. I loved the rhythm of it. It just made me want to fun beside the stream and enjoy the life around it.Cathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08233792477358685156noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post-43214439911571074382012-04-03T16:15:32.034-04:002012-04-03T16:15:32.034-04:00Yes, thank goodness for notebooks! They don't ...Yes, thank goodness for notebooks! They don't judge what you put in them, and never lose a thing. <br /><br />I love the way the rhythm of your poem evokes the strolling and rolling. I need a stream nearby!Sarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12225998457253574928noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post-40993935625851240842012-04-03T14:34:13.001-04:002012-04-03T14:34:13.001-04:00So, although you may not have liked the word at fi...So, although you may not have liked the word at first, skitter turns out to be quite useful! Mary Lee, your poetry writing is spare & sets the scene very well indeed. The poem itself just rolls along, like the river or stream.Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.com