tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post2195214086997464693..comments2024-03-19T05:26:04.770-04:00Comments on A Year of Reading: Poetry Friday -- Ode to a Classroom GoldfishMary Leehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09078793537148794310noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post-91333321171081677652014-02-13T13:43:18.188-05:002014-02-13T13:43:18.188-05:00I love the flow of your ode, though I'm rather...I love the flow of your ode, though I'm rather sad about the fish. Your poetry always makes me smile, even if it's wistfully. Kerihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07754424789728293252noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post-41993002564854232482014-02-09T11:28:40.061-05:002014-02-09T11:28:40.061-05:00Your poem reminds me of the many goldfish we won a...Your poem reminds me of the many goldfish we won at our PTO carnival each year, only to have them die in what seemed a very short time. I'm sorry to hear about your fist, but did enjoy the view from two lenses of the possibility of his life. I'm thinking he found the home to be perfect. <br /><br />CathyCathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08233792477358685156noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post-87472130488403036362014-02-08T22:14:27.629-05:002014-02-08T22:14:27.629-05:00Reminds me of the days we had a little bowl with g...Reminds me of the days we had a little bowl with goldfish for our kids, along with the sad ending. <br /><br />Poem-wise, I liked your line endings combining enjambment and rhyme. Clever!<br /><br /><a href="http://vnesdolypoems.wordpress.com" rel="nofollow">Violet N.</a>Violet N.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16586574800230604652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post-59574211505293144102014-02-08T21:31:05.041-05:002014-02-08T21:31:05.041-05:00What a fabulous Ode for your silent splishy fishy....What a fabulous Ode for your silent splishy fishy. We love goldfish in our house, but unfortunately they've been short lived friends. Great poem, Mary Lee. = )Bridget Mageehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18185985167366724404noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post-78402203290583708142014-02-08T12:57:21.896-05:002014-02-08T12:57:21.896-05:00Mary Lee -- I just heard that scientists discovere...Mary Lee -- I just heard that scientists discovered cod using the ID tags researchers put on them as a tool. They use the tags press (or pull?) on something that releases food. Maybe Ollie *was* using the marbles as a tool to make music, after all.Author Amokhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13636391982938592789noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post-26376158728088896822014-02-08T08:50:15.341-05:002014-02-08T08:50:15.341-05:00Oh, dear. I guess I need to make Ollie's bowl ...Oh, dear. I guess I need to make Ollie's bowl a little more interesting. It probably wouldn't do any good to get him/her a companion for that cramped space, however. <br /><br />I just have to say, to give the other side of the argument, when I first moved to Ohio, I brought two pet goldfish in the car, all the way from Texas, in an aluminum bowl with a plastic lid. Not only did they survive that trip, but they survived a year in the graduate dorm at OSU, and an Ohio earthquake. They both lived to be 12 years old, and they spent their entire lives in the same bowl in which Ollie now lives, with the very same marbles and no other stimulation. So I'm taking the study with a bit of a grain of salt!Mary Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09078793537148794310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post-87810511431060690702014-02-08T07:13:59.315-05:002014-02-08T07:13:59.315-05:00I'm sorry about your fish, Mary Lee. Your poem...I'm sorry about your fish, Mary Lee. Your poem made me wonder whether anyone has done a study to find out how fish feel about fishbowls, and apparently someone has: http://www.geekosystem.com/hate-fish/ Tabathahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14367572663591077922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post-68849417787433416782014-02-08T07:09:28.975-05:002014-02-08T07:09:28.975-05:00Sorry about your goldfish. I love the idea of them...Sorry about your goldfish. I love the idea of them hearing the clinking marbles in the bowl as music. Thanks for sharing!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post-66004072633101221762014-02-08T06:12:49.548-05:002014-02-08T06:12:49.548-05:00I often think about fishbowls, actually, so thank ...I often think about fishbowls, actually, so thank you for this lovely piece.Michelle Heidenrich Barneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02051827857519159837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post-13420539685336657562014-02-08T06:03:42.894-05:002014-02-08T06:03:42.894-05:00So cute! I love the swimmy feel to the lines. I ...So cute! I love the swimmy feel to the lines. I wonder if fish do miss their bowlmates.Donna Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13738281869266957726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post-5913269687763338542014-02-07T19:32:48.010-05:002014-02-07T19:32:48.010-05:00If you really lost a fish friend, I'm sorry. ...If you really lost a fish friend, I'm sorry. Each small life has its place... I love reading this poem - the honoring of the smaller fish and the words, you are such a spinner of great lines. I love the last one.Amy LVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16625469276544426664noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post-44985665839727413092014-02-07T16:18:32.788-05:002014-02-07T16:18:32.788-05:00Poor lonely guy!Sounds like you need to go fish sh...Poor lonely guy!Sounds like you need to go fish shopping this weekend! Carolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13294455230627182656noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post-7182021290364370722014-02-07T15:34:26.082-05:002014-02-07T15:34:26.082-05:00Super sweet poem, Mary Lee! My favorite lines: I ...Super sweet poem, Mary Lee! My favorite lines: I wonder if it was music for you and your lively, larger, solid orange friend. Nicely done!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16067635552523381142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post-66023827279778499182014-02-07T10:34:07.942-05:002014-02-07T10:34:07.942-05:00Goldfish are cute, and they make surprisingly good...Goldfish are cute, and they make surprisingly good scene partners...Little Willowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17058463472836988047noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post-91153572405050039562014-02-07T10:12:20.908-05:002014-02-07T10:12:20.908-05:00Aw, sweet ode, poor little white fish! I agree tha...Aw, sweet ode, poor little white fish! I agree that the orange one needs a new friend.jamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07859083373087448194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post-24705020721315900602014-02-07T07:13:01.721-05:002014-02-07T07:13:01.721-05:00I love this little fish ode. Kinda goes with the ...I love this little fish ode. Kinda goes with the theme of the day considering Greg's elegy to a cookie. I love how you inserted the rhyme that did not interrupt the flow of the ideas. I'm sure there is some literary term for how you did this. Margaret Simonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04434866104385187658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20429083.post-70840387342964014072014-02-07T06:10:54.878-05:002014-02-07T06:10:54.878-05:00Aw, sweet! I really like your use of enjambment to...Aw, sweet! I really like your use of enjambment to "swim" us from line to line. I've often wondered what kind of life fishbowl fish have. I hope you'll be getting the big guy a new friend.Renee LaTulippehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01312695417155507664noreply@blogger.com