ripples
nudge the shoreline
chuckling
©Mary Lee Hahn, 2016
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What a beautiful scene this is, and your poem is perfect. I love to think of those ripples nudging and chuckling. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteMy vacations spots always include water of some kind and mostly lakes. I love the idea of ripples as chuckles. What a beautiful moment at dusk.
ReplyDeleteWhat a perfect image of peace. I agree with Irene and Mandy, the clucking ripples are adorable.
ReplyDeleteThat is so lovely and calming.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful.
ReplyDeleteThe simplicity and imagery are fantastic!
ReplyDeleteI agree!
DeleteWonderful, Mary Lee. I love the picture too, and others you've recently posted.
ReplyDeleteSimply lovely.
ReplyDelete*sigh*...love this tiny soothing poem, Mary Lee. =)
ReplyDeleteSo few words, so much love.
ReplyDeleteLove the unexpected word, "chuckling." That is such a fun way to describe the waves. I'm chuckling, too.
ReplyDeleteSerenity: chuckling ripples nudging the shore at sunset.
ReplyDeleteMary Lee, this is so lovely. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteMary Lee, this is so lovely. Thank you!
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