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Thursday, April 22, 2021

National Poetry Month: #haikudiary.23 and Poetry Friday


car changes color
maroon with a glaze of gold
oak pollen season


©Mary Lee Hahn, 2021


Catherine has this week's Poetry Friday Roundup at Reading to the Core.

 

19 comments:

  1. Ha! I had pollen mixed with frost this morning...so weird and an unattractive mush for sure. I have so enjoyed your haiku diary.

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  2. Clever haiku, nice colors, I hope the car doesn't have allergies, thanks Mary Lee!

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  3. I'm loving your haiku diary!

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  4. Your haiku is a perfect way to document one detail of the season. I notice the pollen on my porch chair.

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  5. Ours hasn't arrived yet for the sneezing season but soon!

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  6. Yes! This is what prompted a haiku earlier this week, that darn yellow dust. Your glaze of gold sounds so much prettier.

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  7. It's a good thing cars don't sneeze! Pollen is not my friend.

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  8. Yes! We are covered with that glaze of gold, too.

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  9. There's a surprise! This one made me chuckle a little.

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  10. I've been sneezing my head off and rubbing my eyes all week, Mary Lee. You've captured pollen perfectly! -- Christie @ https://wonderingandwondering.wordpress.com/

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  11. I know that golden hue well! At least on the maroon, it's a great color combo. ;)

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  12. Ah, that dreaded "glaze of gold." Our's isn't here yet, but will be soon. I love all of your haiku, Mary Lee!

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  13. A wonderful poem! A beautiful way of describing something that requires a lot of work to clean up ;-)

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  14. A true seasonal 'car-meleon', Mary Lee!

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  15. Love how you connect nature and human tech things, Mary Lee. And it IS all connected.

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  16. Anonymous11:33 AM

    A magical cat? No it's the magic of nature!

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  17. I reply with my own:
    Yellow-green or green-yellow

    Steam and pollen mix and can't decide if to rise or fall.
    Yellow-green or green-yellow, this powder-paste coats the dashboard.
    With a finger I record the date: Beltane 2010.

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  18. Oh, that glaze of gold can wreak havoc. :) Well put!

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  19. Not sure if my response came through so here it is again. Ah! Allergy season is upon us and in my case even the mask I wear is giving me symptoms. Your haiku states what is happening quite well.

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