Tenacity

You can never cross the ocean until you have the courage to lose sight of the shore.  ~ André Gide

Tenacity

You are the one who gets the job done. You

don’t wait to be told what to do, you can

find the work and you can do it. This is also true: you are never

the kind to sit on the shore. You cross

to the other side even if you have to paddle across what feels like the

ocean.

You paddle until

you know where you are going. You paddle until you

see the sun coming up to light your way, until you have

a clear view, until you have the

courage

to

lose

all the burdens you carry and set your sight

on the new path that starts at the distant edge of

the

barely visible shore.

©Mary Lee Hahn, 2018

Confidence

Always do what you are afraid to do.  ~ Ralph Waldo Emerson

Confidence

You will not always

be sure, but don’t let that stop you. Do

the brave thing. Do the right thing. Do what

will make the world a better place and you

will be one of the ones who are

not afraid

of what the world asks you to

do.

©Mary Lee Hahn, 2018

Luminosity

When it is dark, be the one who turns on the light.  ~Joseph (in 365 Days of Wonder)

Luminosity

I hear music even when

you can’t. It

calls me to dance, tickles my feet, is

a beam of light when all the world is dark.

My pen calls me, too. Calls me to be

the

one

with a new way to see, the one who

finds beauty, the one who turns

lines on

paper into the

vision that amplifies the world with ever more light.


©Mary Lee Hahn, 2018

Teamwork

It's good to be important, but it's more important to be nice.  ~Anthony’s Grandmother

Teamwork

Your team surrounds you. It’s

the day of the big game and it feels good

to

be

geared up and ready to play. It’s important

to remember that you have to play as a team, but

if you get the chance to make a big play, it’s

nothing that makes you more

important

than any of the other players. No matter what, you have to

always be

humble and just plain nice.

©Mary Lee Hahn, 2018

Congratulations to our school's dodgeball team, the elementary champions for the second year in a row!

Indomitable

Just keep swimming no matter how hard the current is.  ~Ava (365 Days of Wonder)

Indomitable

I will fight for what is just. 

I will keep 

swimming

upstream against hate and discrimination. No

matter

how long the battle, no matter how

hard

the fight, I will do my best to change the

current

way the world is.

©Mary Lee Hahn, 2018

Springtime

Life is short. Make it amazing.  ~Hugh MacLeod 

Springtime

Springtime, and life

returns in a green haze of leafbuds. The seasonal burst of life is

short-

lived, but the surprise of the splashy daffodils will make

it

all the more amazing.

©Mary Lee Hahn, 2018

My Favorite Subject is Science

The miracle is not to fly in the air or to walk on the water, but to walk on the earth.  

~ Chinese Proverb

My Favorite Subject is Science

Photosynthesis is the

miracle

inside plants. Our planet changing from season to season is

not

any less miraculous. And to

learn that planes fly

not because of the engine but in

response to the

lift of the air

under the wings -- amazing! Food chain or

food web – both work elegantly to

balance life in the wild. Walk,

run, stand, sleep: your heart beats on.

The

water

cycle, symbiosis, sound waves – more miracles asking nothing but

that we pay attention to

this walk

we have been given on

the

earth.

©Mary Lee Hahn, 2018

Some process notes about this (crazy) project...

In about mid-March, each of the thirty 5th graders in my class chose a quote from the classroom quote books or the stack of GapingVoid (gapingvoid.com) cartoon-quotes I printed and laminated a few years ago.

Before the end of March, I typed each quote (vertically and right-justified) in its own document.

On the drive from Ohio to Colorado and back during spring break the last week of March, I fiddled around with most of the quotes and wound up with about 10 poems that felt mostly ready. I panicked a bit because I realized that I wouldn't be able to write a poem about each child using the quotes they'd chosen. So I made a sheet with all the names and a brainstorm list of all the topics we've studied so far this year. Whew! There are at least as many topics as students! Some of the poems will wind up being more about the child who chose the quote than others, but all of them taken together will be a record of our year together this year.

In answer to Diane's question from yesterday's comments about how I actually go about drafting the Golden Shovels: As I mentioned, I have the quote written vertically and right-justified. I write into those end words, going for as much enjambment as possible. I am trying to write a poem that's not necessarily on the topic of the quote so that the quote and poem together are a little bit surprising. I think I'll be doing a better job with this in upcoming poems where I won't try to write about the child who gave me the quote. I'll be choosing a quote and writing a poem on a topic from our classroom. Stay tuned. We'll see how that goes! Beyond that, there's lots of staring into space, starting and stopping, retyping the quote again below the first draft and trying another draft (and another), and a nice dose of mystery and magic and surprise!

Keep Your Promises -- this quote came from the child who gave me the 30 days 30 students 30 poems challenge. Seemed only right for him to go first!

Astronomical Passions -- the child who chose this quote aspires to be an astronomer.

Legos -- this original quote was written by a Lego-maniac.

Walt Didn't Say This, But He Would Approve -- my Everything Disney girl wrote this original quote. It was fun to work the Disney-ness in!

100% Authentically ME! -- if you knew this girl, you would understand how perfectly this poem captures her spirit. She beamed when I showed it to her!

My Favorite Subject is Science -- I'm not sure if the guy who chose this quote would agree that science is his favorite subject, but it's definitely a favorite for most students in my class. It's such a perfect age for beginning to learn about the way things work on this beautiful planet (and in this amazing solar system) of ours.

Amy has this week's Poetry Friday Roundup at The Poem Farm.

100% Authentically ME!

Just be who you want to be, not what others want to see.  ~Unknown

100% Authentically ME!

I am me. Perfect just

the way I am. I will not be

someone who

changes the way I look at the world because of what you

say or do. I want

to

always be

the one who tells the truth, not

without a smile, but also not just repeating what

others

say. I want

to be authentic, to

show you all the truths I see.

©Mary Lee Hahn, 2018

Walt Didn't Say This, But He Would Approve

If you have a life, why not live it!  ~Lexie

Walt Didn't Say This, But He Would Approve

If

you

wish upon a star you will have

a

life

filled not with the why

but the why not.

Grab life by the mouse ears and live

it!

©Mary Lee Hahn, 2018

Legos

We are strong as one, but we are stronger together.  ~Brennan

Legos

Like Legos, we

stick together. We are

not just strong,

we are as creative as

the wildest imagination. Like Legos, you start with one

but

you end with something surprising and new. We

really are

stronger

together.

©Mary Lee Hahn, 2018

Astronomical Passions

Invite others to wonder with you.  ~Austin Kleon

Astronomical Passions

Black holes! Galaxies! Space! The Universe will invite

you to be awed and amazed. Find others

with the same astronomical passions to

marvel at, to wonder

about, and to investigate with

you.

©Mary Lee Hahn, 2018

Keep Your Promises

Make your life a masterpiece. Imagine no limitations on what you can be, have, or do.  ~Brian Tracy

Keep Your Promises

I accept your challenge. I will make 

a poem using each of your 

quotes. A snapshot of your life 

in fifth grade, the collection will not be a 

masterpiece 

and I imagine 

no 

one will appreciate the poems as much as you. The limitations 

I have put on 

myself with these poems will show you that what 

you 

challenge yourself to do can 

be 

done. You have 

to keep your promises. There is no either/or: 

do what you said you would do.

©Mary Lee Hahn, 2018

Poetry Month 2018

This year's class -- The Hahn Squad -- loves to find patterns.
They have found patterns in the date
(one of our favorites all year, a Squad Member's birthday, was 3/6/18...3x6=18),
in recurring themes in our read alouds (the desire for invisibility),
and in the lucky coincidence that there are 30 days in April and 30 students in our class.

When the 30 Days, 30 Students, 30 Poems challenge was laid at my feet by an eager and earnest Squad Member, what could I do? I had to accept.

For their part, I asked each of the 30 Squad Members to chose a quote they love. I originally intended to write a personalized Golden Shovel Poem for each student using their quote as the striking line. Although some may turn out to be specific to the student who chose the quote, most will pay tribute to some part of the 2017-2018 5th Grade Hahn Squad experience.

Poetry Friday: Saying Goodbye

Unsplash Photo by Steve Johnson

Saying Goodbye

The storage unit is pitch black. 

The boxes 

are stacked right where we left them. I kick one with my shoe 

and wonder what I’m going to do with these boxes 

once I get them home. There will be new 

piles of boxes 

in our basement. I’d rather have you 

back than all these memories stuffed into boxes.

©Mary Lee Hahn, 2018

This Golden Shovel was written for the March 2018 Ditty Challenge using part of a line of a poem by Devon Hope. I wrote it to remind myself that I can write in this form. (I wrote one last April for Malvina Reynolds.) I wrote it because of my poem-a-day challenge for April (coming up at the speed of time). When I began my "sort of a Slice of Life Challenge but not really" for March, I hadn't decided what I'd do for my Poetry Month challenge. I was talking to my students about the goals and challenges writers set for themselves and one of them laid down the gauntlet. Our classroom family has since grown from 29 to 30, so...why not. I've never in my career had 30 students (never again, please), so why not write a poem about each child? Never one to make things easy for myself, I've had each student choose a quote that resonates with him/her. 

In April, I will write a Golden Shovel for/about each of my 30 students using the quote they chose as the poem's "striking line."

(Eep!)

Linda has the Poetry Friday Roundup this week at TeacherDance.

Regrets

For the next half of National Poetry Month 2017, 

Malvina will Sing It, and I'll write a poem in response.

Another unifying topic in Malvina Reynolds' songs is the environment. The next few days will feature songs written in the 1960's and 1970's, but which are fresh and topical today.

Today's poem is a Golden Shovel. The last word in each of my lines reads down, like an acrostic, and is a line from today's song by Malvina Reynolds, "Let it Be." Last month, I buried the story of the loss of two beautiful and magical places inside a book review, and when I set out to write today's poem, it became a lament of the most recent replacement of magic with convenience. Clearly, I'm not over that yet.

Regrets

You do the best you can until you

can do no more. You think

about the choices that

you made and you

wonder if your love

could ever have been enough for her

survival. You planted and

weeded and you

hoped someone else would want

to become caretaker to

this magical place where kids could discover

the workings of nature -- how

intricately she's

designed -- made

with milkweed, for example, expressly so

there can be monarchs. Because you

loved that plot, you take

it personally that they leveled her

and undid all your work; took apart

a piece of what made this world good and

right, wild and free. Your regrets threaten to break

 your belief in yourself, but her

 beauty remains whole in your heart.

©Mary Lee Hahn, 2017

Sing It, Malvina!

April 1 -- Working for Change
April 2 -- A Lifetime Filled With Change
April 3 -- Red
April 4 -- Little Red Hen
April 5 -- Childhood Dreams
April 6 -- Lonely Child
April 7 -- Quiet

April 8 -- Storyteller
April 9 -- Troublemaker
April 10 -- Girl Power
April 11 -- Choices
April 12 -- My Gal, Mother Nature
April 13 -- Not a Joke
April 14 -- I Don't Mind Failing

April 15 -- What is Feminism?

April 16 -- Holes

April 17 -- They Can Have Their Cake and Eat it, Too

April 18 -- We Won't Be Nice

April 19 -- Grass is Persistent

April 20 -- Ticky Tacky

April 21 -- Regrets

Tabatha has the Poetry Friday Roundup this week at The Opposite of Indifference.