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BUBBLE
thin
skin:
just
water
and
soap
clear sphere:
a vessel
of hope
©Mary Lee Hahn, 2013
From Kevin (Kevin's Meandering Mind):
Hold me gently:
fingertips touching tender skin;
for inside,
I remain invisible
and vulnerable to the way things have been.
I float above this world,
in a cloak of color
but my rainbow drains easily,
so be gentle.
©Kevin Hodgson, 2013
A gentle puff
rainbow carriage
appears
dancing
shimmering
glimmering
inviting me
to journey
to a magical
far away
fairy world.
(c) Carol Wilcox, 2013
From Margaret (Reflections on the Teche):
in a bubble
like a looking glass
transparent
spherical
silky
slide across
slip inside
pop
fly!
©Margaret Simon, 2013
From Lisa (steps and staircases):
and a haiku:
Bubble reflecting
my home, my world, me; this day
an island in time
my home, my world, me; this day
an island in time
©Lisa
From Cathy (Merely Day by Day):
Bubbles
Bubble, Bubble,
blow, blow.
Bubble, bubble,
grow, grow.
Bubble, bubble,
soar, soar.
Bubble, bubble,
more, more.
Bubble, bubble,
fly, fly,
Bubble, bubble,
high, high,
Bubble, bubble,
drop, drop,
Bubble, bubble,
Pop!
Pop!
©Cathy Mere, 2013
Laura Purdie Salas has the Poetry Friday roundup this week at Writing the World for Kids.
Here is the other media I've featured this week (and, of course, the poems the media inspired--poems by me, and by the three or four other people who have been playing along with me this month):
Thursday: Photo of Broadway Tower
Wednesday: Video of a Sushi Train
Tuesday: Sound of Birdsong
Monday: "Irises" by Vincent VanGogh
Sunday: Animation of a Rubik's Cube (edited to add a video made by one of my students of him solving the cube in under 20 seconds)
Saturday: Old Map of San Antonio, TX
The theme of my 2013 National Poetry Month Project is
"Common Inspiration--Uncommon Creations."
I will be using the media to inspire my poetry, but I am going to invite my students to use my daily media picks to inspire any original creation: poems, stories, comics, music, videos, sculptures, drawings...anything!
You are invited to join the fun, too! Leave a link to your creation in the comments and I'll add it to that day's post. I'll add pictures of my students' work throughout the month as well.
Hold me gently:
ReplyDeletefingertips touching tender skin;
for inside,
I remain invisible
and vulnerable to the way things have been.
I float above this world,
in a cloak of color
but my rainbow drains easily,
so be gentle.
-Kevin
The podcast: http://vocaroo.com/i/s0MooiPbR3y0
Kevin,
DeleteAs always, I love going to the podcast and hearing your voice read the words you wrote. Think that's so, so powerful. This morning I especially loved those last two lines…I'll be thinking about, "My rainbow drains easily" all day.
Thanks, Carol.
DeleteI hope the words are gentle with you ....
Love the POV of the bubble itself.
DeleteAnd I second what Carol said about your podcasts. Please don't forget to say, "I hope you write a poem today, too." That is my favorite part!!
"Soap Bubble"
ReplyDeleteA gentle puff
rainbow carriage
appears
dancing
shimmering
glimmering
inviting me
to journey
to a magical
far away
fairy world.
(c) Carol Wilcox, 2013
Your use of rainbow imagery was a nice connection back to mine (intentional or not). The "rainbow carriage" is a great phrase. What is it about rainbows and the magical element, eh?
DeleteKevin
I, too, love your "rainbow carriage." You have brought the fairytale magic from yesterday into this poem!
DeleteMary Lee, again, I am stunned by your ability to take such a very few words (12 today) and craft them into such a gorgeous message. Wow…
ReplyDeleteCarol, that is EXACTLY Mary Lee's talent, isn't it? Making so much from so few words. While this poem seems like just a happy little bubble itself and children will love it for its simple image, we (older ones) all know what happens to bubbles (and unfortunately to hope, too) . . .
DeleteExactly!
DeleteThank you for your compliments! I'm still more than a little awestruck as I watch this "talent" emerge and develop from MY side of the pen. I'm learning to listen to it, to trust it, to follow it.
DeleteFor this poem, I had the first bit, and I knew that soap would rhyme with hope, but then dinner was ready. We ate and were relaxing with a little bit of TV when "clear sphere" popped (ha) into my head, accompanied by a little rush of "YES!"
Mary Lee
ReplyDeletewonderful last line to your poem.
Kevin
Just lovely!
ReplyDeleteVery nice Mary Lee! You catch the essence of a bubble.
ReplyDeleteViolet N.
Beautiful. What a great last word.
ReplyDeleteYou pack so much into such a little space...that's a real sign of talent. Love it.
ReplyDeleteYour bubble poem is 'bubblicious', Mary Lee! Perfect choice of words throughout. =)
ReplyDeleteTo see life
ReplyDeletein a bubble
like a looking glass
transparent
spherical
silky
slide across
slip inside
pop
fly!
I like how fly (YAY) is the end of your poem instead of pop (WAH)!
DeleteThis picture appears the morning after I was inspired to make chalk bubbles yesterday afternoon-->Both bubble images shared to involve others! You can find pictures here:
ReplyDeletehttp://stepsandstaircases.tumblr.com/post/48901784100/invitations-to-draw
The connection inspired a haiku--
Bubble reflecting
my home, my world, me; this day
an island in time
I've been reading these posts every day, and enjoying every word written in response. Thank you to all the poets. Mary Lee, and Franki, thank you for all you share--This blog is a gift, floating through the universe, like the beautiful bubble pictured here.
Lisa,
DeleteThank you for sharing the coincidence of your chalk bubbles! What a fun invitation!! I love your haiku, especially "this day/an island in time." Yes.
Your blog, too, is a beautiful gift to the universe, a bubble floating around alongside ours! I admire what you do with an image and only a very few words. I intend to keep writing a poem every day or two after 4/30, and your blog will be one of the places I go for inspiration!
I think this is my new Mary Lee favorite...just amazing what you are able to do with an image and a thimble full of words.
ReplyDelete:-)
Delete"a thimble full"
:-)
Hi Mary, I love these lines from you:
ReplyDelete"clear sphere:
a vessel
of hope"
- I love bubbles. :)
I went first grade today!
ReplyDeleteBubbles
Bubble, Bubble,
blow, blow.
Bubble, bubble,
grow, grow.
Bubble, bubble,
soar, soar.
Bubble, bubble,
more, more.
Bubble, bubble,
fly, fly,
Bubble, bubble,
high, high,
Bubble, bubble,
drop, drop,
Bubble, bubble,
Pop!
Pop!
Perfect for the little ones! And here is another masterful use of only a few words -- only NINE in Cathy's!
DeleteBeautiful, Mary Lee. I just ran out of steam today, couldn't make the poem. Glad to see so many!
ReplyDeleteLove your poem, Mary Lee--so succinct and vivid.
ReplyDeleteA lot going on inside that little bubble poem, and a perfect pairing for that image. Well done, Mary Lee. -Ed
ReplyDeleteI'm finally getting to the Poetry Friday posts. Thanks for all the loveliness this month, and enjoy your rest now that the month is over!
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