If the poem's fire, and ideas, the tinder, kindling, then your pen's the match.
I switched the order of your first and last line because I feel the greater epiphany deserves to go last. But I kept it as a haiku, which was tough! Regardless, I'm honored that my Metaphor Dice might have helped you excavate this truth.
Thank you so much for stopping by! The honor is all mine.
It's interesting that you saw the pen/match as the greater epiphany. I'm sticking with the poetry/fire. Two different poems from the same metaphor! I appreciate you taking time to "play" along!
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Franki and Mary Lee are both teachers, and have been for more than 20 years.
Franki is a fifth grade teacher. She is the author of Beyond Leveled Books (Stenhouse), Still Learning to Read (Stenhouse), and Day-to-Day Assessment in the Reading Workshop (Scholastic).
Mary Lee is a fifth grade teacher. She is the author of Reconsidering Read-Aloud (Stenhouse) and has poems in the Poetry Friday Anthology, the Poetry Friday Anthology for Middle School, the Poetry Friday Anthology for Science, the Poetry Friday Anthology for Celebrations (Pomelo Books), Dear Tomato: An International Crop of Food and Agriculture Poems, National Geographic Books of Nature Poems, The Best of Today's Little Ditty (2014-15 and 2016), Amy Ludwig VanDerwater's Poems are Teachers, National Geographic's The Poetry of US, and IMPERFECT: Poems About Mistakes.
I’m always amazed at the way you can create powerful meaning with a few carefully selected words. Perfect!
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ReplyDeleteLove it, Mary Lee.
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If the poem's fire,
ReplyDeleteand ideas, the tinder, kindling,
then your pen's the match.
I switched the order of your first and last line because I feel the greater epiphany deserves to go last. But I kept it as a haiku, which was tough! Regardless, I'm honored that my Metaphor Dice might have helped you excavate this truth.
Thank you so much for stopping by! The honor is all mine.
DeleteIt's interesting that you saw the pen/match as the greater epiphany. I'm sticking with the poetry/fire. Two different poems from the same metaphor! I appreciate you taking time to "play" along!
Exactly! Well done.
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