True to the spirit of collaboration and community here in Poetry Friday Land, Irene Latham started the National Poetry Month tradition of a crowd-sourced Progressive Poem, and then handed the baton to Margaret Simon this year. Margaret put out the call and thirty poets quickly filled the schedule. (See bottom of post.) This year, #1 Donna Smith started things off by giving #2 Irene Latham the choice of two lines, and so that's the way the poem's flowing this year. You get to pick a line, and offer two possibilities to the next person. Here are the choices Heidi offered me. I got to choose between "slow and mesmerizing, or brief and energizing."
Here's the poem so far:
Progressive Poem 2020
Sweet violets shimmy, daffodils sway
along the wiregrass path to the lake
I carry a rucksack of tasty cakes
and a banjo passed down from my gram.
I follow the tracks of deer and raccoon
and echo the call of a wandering loon.
A whispering breeze joins in our song
and night melts into a rose gold dawn
Deep into nature’s embrace, I fold.
Promise of spring helps shake the cold
hints of sun lightly dapple the trees
calling out the sleepy bees
Leaf-litter crackles…I pause. Twig snaps.
I gasp! Shudder! Breathe out. Relax...
as a whitetail doe comes into view.
She shifts and spotted fawns debut.
I want this moment to last a little longer, so I choose...
We freeze. My green eyes and her brown
Tag, you're it, Tabatha!
Your two choices for the next line are:
meet and lock. Time slows down.
OR
connect in a moment so profound
Here's where the poem's been, and where it's going:
1 Donna Smith at Mainely Write
2 Irene Latham at Live Your Poem
3 Jone MacCulloch at deowriter
4 Liz Steinglass
5 Buffy Silverman
6 Kay McGriff
7 Catherine Flynn at Reading to the Core
8 Tara Smith at Going to Walden
9 Carol Varsalona at Beyond Literacy Link
10 Matt Forrest Esenwine at Radio, Rhythm, and Rhyme
11 Janet Fagel, hosted at Reflections on the Teche
12 Linda Mitchell at A Word Edgewise
13 Kat Apel at Kat Whiskers
14 Margaret at Reflections on the Teche
15 Leigh Anne Eck at A Day in the Life
16 Linda Baie at Teacher Dance
17 Heidi Mordhorst at My Juicy Little Universe
18 Mary Lee Hahn at A Year of Reading
19 Tabatha at Opposite of Indifference
20 Rose Cappelli at Imagine the Possibilities
21 Janice Scully at Salt City Verse
22 Julieanne Harmatz at To Read, To Write, To Be
23 Ruth at There is no such thing as a God-forsaken town
24 Christie Wyman at Wondering and Wandering
25 Amy at The Poem Farm
26 Dani Burtsfield at Doing the Work That Matters
27 Robyn Hood Black at Life on the Deckle Edge
28 Jessica Bigi at TBD
29 Fran Haley at lit bits and pieces
30 Michelle Kogan
Mary Lee, you chose the better line, rhythmically speaking, and I'm glad we get to pause in this moment of connection. Nice choices for Tabatha!
ReplyDeleteIt is a sweet moment to "stay", Mary Lee. Heidi's line then your choices help us explore more of this moment. Nice!
ReplyDeleteSuch a lovely scene being shared here!
ReplyDeleteI love that we get to stay in this moment. Your choices are both wonderful, Mary Lee. I'm really anxious to see what Tabitha chooses because I'll be next!
ReplyDeleteI like the connection and the pause.
ReplyDeleteMary Lee, I read the poem again with both of your lines and said, "Wow!" I actually encountered a moment like on one of the Northern Virginia nature trails. I'm wondering what Tabatha chooses and adds on. Either of your options adds intrigue and a deeper connection between narrator and the animals.
ReplyDeleteI'm a big fan of this choice option this year. It adds another layer to the suspense! I like your choice from Heidi's two and think you sent two great choices winging their way to Tabatha.
ReplyDeleteGlad that we're spending a little more time in this magical moment. Love your choices for Tabatha--I know which one I would pick. Have to check tomorrow to see which way Tabatha goes.
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad you are prolonging this magical moment.
ReplyDeleteLove this poem, and your two choices, I'm climbing in…
ReplyDeleteI want "meet and lock. Time slows down." Will just have to read on to see what Tabatha chose.
ReplyDeleteYes to making the moment last!
ReplyDeleteOooh - great options. (I kind of like that extra weight of 'lock' - even suggests a gun to me, which adds an underlayer of tension to the line, even subconsciously maybe? Or perhaps I'm just up way too late... ;0) ) Off to see which line was chosen!
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